Symbion associations
of entangled bodies
and not of hearts
Hmm..
Orbs of flesh
float around
incising thoughts inside
exodus of emotions,
finding their way
out as tears
as it too would taste less saline
amidst reaching my temples
As I lay drenched
with dilated eyes
in the once vermillion
painted yard
Now, the home of
virginal winter rain....
5 comments:
Orbs of flesh
float around
incising thoughts inside
very imaginative... very different.. liked quiet a bit. good going buddy
Autumn here too? Read this poem before, but somehow your blog's comment box was not working then :) Good to see it working now. Needless to say, lovely lines, searing emotions and words that will haunt forever.
~Lo
exodus of emotions,
finding their way
out as tears
as it too would taste less saline"
Brilliant words!! excellent formations
Wow. I liked this piece. Particularly the way you picked and arranged your words, that made me think of a smooth flowing river.
mmmmm...
"Symbion associations
of entangled bodies
and not of hearts."
and also,
"the once vermillion
painted yard
Now, the home of
virginal winter rain..."
Nice! Keep writing :)
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