Along the isles of Corsica,
and in the sands
of Marseille and Nice
I wander,
Inside a pristine dream
Bacchanalian feasts,
a grandeur,
of wine, of women
Fellow troubadours greet
and continue their way
Reaching a saline quarter
I seat my self upon
one of the many
silences afloat
and think..
The waves continue to ebb
Froths swell, bubble
and burst
Whilst I scribble
An ode, a sonnet
and a couplet verse
imbecile contempt
sets in on what's been writ
A head left ajar
to panthom thoughts
washed ashore
Nothings strikes
an inspiration..
Am marooned, I said
under bleak luminated cresent
and bewitching
mermaid beside...
21 comments:
'I seat my self upon
one of the many
silences afloat
and think..'
Such wonderful word play here! The imagery is very powerful and I could almost see you 'marooned'!
:)
pincushion am glad you could see through my eyes.. thanks for dropping by :)
a tone that transports you straight into medieval Europe...enigmatic yet very atmospheric...very nice!
..and a tip of the hat to another person from Germany...yours truly is from Cologne...it is a rare sight indeed to see someone from Germany writing in English! or are you from some other land?
Am from the land of the plenty, am from India.
Am glad u liked the wrk thanks much.
ah you are from India too...as they say doubly nice! I am from India as well, a pukka Hyderabadi!
beautiful...as always...btw, who is the mermaid? ;)
sehr gut...
my God...its beyond my skills of imagination...
Anil freut mich, am glad to know..greetings to u brother..
Lo dear shes the one in the thoughts.. :), the one who made this CHANGE..
Sophia.. freut mich sehr und vielen dank..thanks for dropping by :)
ich komme aus Chennai, India
Oh Ich auch dear... :). Wo haben sie Deutsch gelernt?
i learnt German Language from Max Muller Bahvan
wat do u do..in Germany?
Hey kindered soul thanks for dropping by again. Who is ur fac at MMB Jerome, sundarajan,lalitha mam,Angelica .. hmm getting nostalgic thinking bout those days sophia..I had passed out from there (GrundStuffe III). Kadhar Nawaz Khan road Nungambakam had seen us all, in our true colors, in all seasons. Barrista, Wills and the mobile tea shop and what not.. I miss em all. Wish to turn back the sand glass jus to live it one again, jus once.
Singing "Neun und Neunzig luft ballons.."
Ich arbeite im Deutschland..btw.
Hows life there back home..i know its raining cud feel it in ur posts...hope all is well under the sun and rain there :)
:) What a pleasant surprise!
And nice imagery, "A head left ajar
to panthom thoughts..."
Pax?
:) Athena suprise ??
thanks *bowing*
Pax - Kiss of peace left afloat in the air ..:)
Surprise at the Indian connection. I had *no* idea!
Can imagine the serene
kiss, floating peacefully. :)
Athena :) *am humbled*
gutten tag...
wie gehts
ich bin seht gut
ja i too enjoyed the wills showroom, ispahni, mobile teashop and all the stuff there...
i was thought by frow.meena narayanan...some classes by frow.lalitha..
the fun in the class was more than Deutsch learning
Sophia Tag bitte... Es Geht mir gut. Freut mich dass Sie sehr gut sind.
Frau Meena, yep and Frau Lalitha how can I ever forget her. She translated one of my poem in german for GrudStuff I farewell.
Yep whole of the Goethe institut was lively and ever happening...more of a hang out place it was .. too many associations in my head :)..
well.. Wass ist passiert? Was machen sie heute? Studieren sie noch oder arbeiten..
had commented earlier today but my comment seems to have been consigned to the virtual dustbin...a'ways here it goes again...
thanks for dropping by my photoblog and commenting...much appreciated!
Exquisite imagery. I am glad I dropped in here. :-)
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