I paint your dreams
from inside cauldron eyes
while you confabulate I'd bleach
realities to tungsten blue
yawn and yearn while I'd re-sketch
dusk with burning sienna
you'd live a different dream,
in my dreams, tonight
may be once, so you could smell
the paints, with which I
continue to paint your life...
18 comments:
I so like the use of these colors here. :)
while you confabulate I'd bleach
realities to tungsten blue...
Well done!
hmmm......
I still don't get it. Why are you painting someone else's life?
DG :)
Athena Thanks much :)
CA um hmm :)
...M...hahahaha its not me who is painting someone else's life, its an interpretation of dreams and visualising somebody is painting it for us. Usual dreams and day dreams. I visualised it to be a person who does it, called him, the painter man. Since writing it in passive tone might not render a sensual effect, I use one char to be me and the other to be you. :)
Thanks much for asking anyway.
It is enigmatic! u have painted it well, i must say, better than that Painter Man (or woman), whoever he is... :)
I have always loved the use of color in poetry and you used it in this poem so well. So well that I am awash with hues of blues and siennas. So well that I want to dream dreams tonight.
Good to see u back and painting prettier dreams :) excellent.
Just beautiful. I use the word paint a lot
in my poetry also.
A visual feast! Excellent! :-)
Cheers
Dan
Vidya :)
Free Spirit Am glad :)
Lo hmmm ..changing colors thats it :)
Shyloh Thanks a bunch :)
Dan *bows* thanks :)
painter, visions all colorful...tat was awesome work pax
Sophie Thanks :)
No new post? :)
I paint your dreams
from inside cauldron eyes
These first two lines have won me over. I am mesmerized. ^_^
Happy holidays!
By the way, "odi et amo"? "I hate and I love"? Ahh, a Latin proverb that sounds beautiful to speak...
*hug*
the painter is wonderful i wonder how the painter's artist would be like .....
i look up to ppl who write poems because that is something i cant do in my life time
but i love reading them even though little meaning gets into me .....
the painter has indeed won me over ...
Good show
Ash
hey...nice poem...very beautiful..esp the play of colours
oh! btw..we both have the same concept- on our header...change is the only constant(that's mine:))
and I'm pisces too!hehe..thanks for dropping by..:)
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