Sorrows, preamble to tears
Serum sieves through the wounds
Would morph to stigmata and then heal
"It bled for you", she said
Yes, for the pound of flesh, beholds
Is not hers but mine instead..
I would resurrect her love
Like pleasures of whimsical rain
Carry her along, while she follows
Like twig less leaf in untamed wind
certainly appears aggrandized
But ask her to dream jus once more tonight
For last of incubus she'd see
By the dawn she's gone, in my arms, with me..
II
Her wings would not spread
words fail and thoughts obfuscate
she's stalled, in search of the wound
from where she bled..
Her silent moans and tearless cries
aren't whispers to be missed
I could sense her palpitation
despite her stoic calm
and see through her pain
here, offer mine, for it has dried-up,
to damask of scars & stains
I'll take her heart, as her, myself
heal 'em all, each by each
with nothing less than
wet quivering kiss...
~Cura te Ipsum~
P.s:In an attempt to heal someone's wounds, someone who is very dear and a good soul :)
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I could sense her palpitation
despite her stoic calm
and see through her pain
here, offer mine, for it has dried-up,
to damask of scars & stains
I'll take her heart, as her, myself
heal 'em all, each by each
with nothing less than
wet quivering kiss...
wat else can one offer to heal a bleeding heart....loved every line ...felt it very close to my heart...
Wow...
Amen...i hope you succeed in healing :)
hope it helped...but this is godawsome in its own right
Medha
o u linked me...ty
ur friend has YOU! That is sufficient consolation for pain....
I mean it... Friends are the best things in one's life, after family...
really well worded!
The intimate feelings were subtle but impressive:) cheers! hope she heals!
atchoo....hankie plz :D
Beautiful!
Arti
wow...its just tooooooo beautiful!!!...really wonderful piece of work!!!
hey btw neat pic:)
Poetry is the next best thing to an analgesic balm! :-))
time fer an update
Truly awesome. Great job.
u've been tagged :P
DG If "She" says so.. :)
Sophia Thanks a bunch kindered soul..:)
Vanathi :)
Lady I hope so too..Amen:)
C.A Thanks pally & ur most welcome :). I have running nose and if you don mind be my guest here is my hankie.. :P
Vidyanjali Yep very true. Thanks deary :)
Christine n Leon Welcome here gud souls.. *hugs* to both of you :)
The Ego Thanks for your wishes, she's healing fast :)
Akansha Thanks Arti :)
Dan But jus that not gud for self medication ;)
Shyloh Thanks much :)
Dreamy Eyed Girl Thanks much dear :)
how've you been? i came here once a long time back then lost the url. ur still writing as spell casting-ly, i see. hope someone's pain is better or that they can bear it till it passes? take care.
ugh, thanks but no thanks...ur disgusting, vinxie!!!
This is beautiful V. :))
i like it .....i guess it should be reading ur poems that make me come back or start with poems again ...reading and comprehending them and enjoying the beauty of the verses and thoughts rather than writing!!!
cya
Ash
beautiful!!!...wonderful attempt;-)
btw,saw ur reply to my post and must say,i'm speechless!!!
My first stop.
But have been reading your work at Demi's blog. You are too good man!
Wud love to see more of your work. Keep it up :)
Arrey Bhai! Humne to socha aap ne kuch naya post kiya hoga! Yahan to wahi dard pe marham! :-))
So, you're going the Bluey way these days! Thanks for dropping in at my blog. :-)
Cheers
Dan
new post? fans waiting :D
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