Monday, February 06, 2006

Gathering clouds I



One way ticket..

I killed it
as you wanted me to
murdered some fears
maraud in search for some.
simple verses,
the life of me and
The complex, curses
me to death.
how long is this
abnegation?
Black some. Gray some
It all ends here
As It all ends now
with a fortuitous climax
of shadows tied to
rail track of
a ghostly train
to hell, with it,
all innate
fears & hidden lives
begotten..




Redemption

Try hard to hide,
pretty Magnolia, but passions never hide
speaking heart not an ignominy
Exposed, never a parody
A gentle soul you are
that seeks no more than unbridled love
So you'll find
or better have already, waiting at your doorsteps like an unsullied Dove..
Wings of desire, Isn't the Icarus kind.
Fall, we would, but be redeemed
again..



Prisoner

In your sly smile
I see captivating glory of Tamburlaine,
wondering what you could've captured possibly?
sinking slowly in the ocular quagmire of your countenance
Glistening pearldrops by those eyes
And Gothic arches by those lips.
thoughts about self seems
trifled but an image
appeared, and there
I was, caught & captured
in the cobweb of
your impeccable
contrivance.
~

22 comments:

: M : said...

yo vinxie mez first...and whoa wataway to go buddy boy..worth the wait:) one way ticket especially struck a chord. good job mate :)

Prerona said...

why? passions never hide - true and sad. was suposed to be in germany on the 15th but think wont be able to make it :(

che sara sara said...

words...
mended to sound as strings
to feel as in the air...
i am toally dimmed in ecstasy...

Nayan said...

If I could, I wud take away all your poems and bead them into an ornament, to be put in a showcase for long time.. they are really touching. :)

twip said...

Profound and very insightful...I am spechless at the beauty of your poetry..
Megha

Vidhu Venkat said...

Awesome...excellent conversations of a disturbed mind! Need i say more..gud work

Innocent Bullet said...

Bhai! Yeah to kamaal kar diya aapne. Teenon ek se badh kar ek hain!

"Gothic arches by those lips" Waah! Waah! Lajawaab! :-)

Cheers

Dan

Devilish Angel said...

Wow... Great words...

Φ said...

yet i couldnt comeout of the cobweb of the magic spell caused by ur words and the poetic sense in it.

i ve no words to praise u..

keep it up boy...

twip said...

"sinking slowly in the ocular quagmire of your countenance"........enigmatic yet starkly simple meaning....true gift.
Megha

Anonymous said...

no words as usual :P floooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooored :D

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btw, removed the comments link off my other blog. pls dont mind. never intended to have comments there in the 1st place :)

Juhi Dua said...

beautiful...
loved the way you've created nuances..

Wings of desire, Isn't the Icarus kind..

sinking slowly in the ocular quagmire of your countenance
Glistening pearldrops by those eyes
And Gothic arches by those lips.

divine..
good that i read you first thing today...
:)

Inkblot said...

"Ocular quagmire...",contrived... yes yes yes. why do we all get it so right and so wrong?

Dreamy Eyed Gal said...

O my God...all 3 were so beautiful...how do u write so well??...and that too on such different themes...tooo gud!!!

shyloh's poetry said...

What and excellent job dear. You do have a way of getting one's attention and holding it.

Thanks for your awesome comment on my poem.

Dreamy Eyed Gal said...

the 3 poems r interlinked i agree bt they still r 3 different emotions...and u xpressed so wonderfully...luv ur writing..and thnx for visiting my blog!!!

Dreamy Eyed Gal said...

waiting for ur next post;-)

Vincent said...

I liked Prisoner.

Vidya said...

I liked Redemption the best and of course the other two are too good as well, but something about Redemption touched a chord, there was a softness in the way it went...

Tell me this, WHO INSPIRES U? I know it's difficult to answer that but still can't help being curious!! :)

Vidya said...

Re-read Prisoner, strong use of word-painting there...