Saturday, February 18, 2006

Gathering Clouds II

Gathering slow
  in the misty skies
beneath the folds
  of her clouded kirtle
gobbling down
  the iridescent bow
and the orbed-Sun
  making it dark
before dusk
  propositioned to foreplay
with frugal orgasms
  yet again, drenching
vertices & thickets
  In her whimsical pour
while appearing to
  have touched at
horizon, but,
  climaxed without touching
at all..

12 comments:

Inkblot said...

a poem to lie back and enjoy- like a thick wet smoothie with lots of ingredients.

: M : said...

all your posts are getting overtly sexual, my man!

this reminded me of apollo and athena by the way ;)

Prerona said...

exquisite! can u be the same man i teach hindi! lol. hey - i have talked to the mba guy. grab me when u see me nxt on gtlk and ill give u his email id

che sara sara said...

come on gimme a brk da...

Vidya said...

A combination of words and madness should I say?

the_ego_has_landed said...

wooooooooohhhhhhh...nice

Anonymous said...

:)

Blue Athena said...

*frugal orgasms!* :)

Lovely V!

Vidhu Venkat said...

This is one of ur best offlate...or is it??

well done once again

twip said...

"climaxed without touching at all"...well well......interesting....but great effort nevertheless.:)
cheers!
Megha

PNA said...

i was wondering what u are hinting at throughout the time i read it a second time .....the inner meaning as it is said........

maybe i'll get it i read a 10th time i guess so

how have u been
good day
Ash

Φ said...

Inkblot Yep have a scoop more ;-) ..thanks a bunch

C.A Ahem, art sees no prejudice.. :)

Prerona Yep, two forms of same self. :)

Sophia Break?? yea have a kit-kat :P

Vidya Yep it is, words of a madman..:)

EgoHL Thaaaaaaaaaaaaanks :)

Lady :)

Athena Thanks a bunch :)

Vidhu Not my best, certainly not. Best is always yet to come :)

Megha Thanks dear :)

Ash Honestly its about raining and clouds ;-)..really :P
Am fine thank you dear. How have you been?. Good day to you dear one