Am
carried by
the tempest
of your thoughts
and reach you to be
Slaved. Slayed.
I speak no further
or show grimace
whip me with
words tease
and torture
I am your
bitch and
enslaved
whore
~
carried by
the tempest
of your thoughts
and reach you to be
Slaved. Slayed.
I speak no further
or show grimace
whip me with
words tease
and torture
I am your
bitch and
enslaved
whore
~
18 comments:
:O
wow! now its my turn to be amazed :) btw - drop me a line and let me know the date for the big day coming up :P
Profane...?? but wot happened to "Slave" ...excellent lines...and i liked the way the first two lines being changed...this is much betta!
oh my God...gimme a brk
actually i think a different title is in order- why rnt u replyin to any comments now vinxie????
:) addressed to whom? :)
S&M?
Good, creative one :)
HMMMM
That's need redefined for you :-) Nice.
oooh...
btw...happy bday! :) or advanced..or belated...cheers to pisceans!:)
Woah!
Those were some strong words
Wonderful! You don't disappoint V! :-)
I c u removed the last post...
CA :D
Prerone Thanks :). Some time in April
DG Sorry to made u puke.. :(
Vidhu Thanks da
Sophia Gud lord have one
CA I do..I do..:).Sory its tad late cos of my wrk..
^_^
LO Those bloggers whom I visit
Inky No..eminem
Vanathi Thanks kindered one..
DEG :)
GOTMJ Its not need, is my way of saying, "I like it"
TEHL Thanks sweet heart
Ekta :)..Sounds like a fanatic isn't it
Dan *bows* Thanks much for ur kind words Dan.
DEG Yep, don't want to be reminded of getting older.. :)
Ah, so we are mutual friends of Dan Husain. A good link. Would you like to join the blog we are both on Spilled to Bloodlessness? Just email me at the email on my profile. You will rock. Thanks for visiting my silly blog;
ah! beautiful!
EOTR Sure will. Visiting you was my pleasure..:) Thanks for dropping by
Sneha Not half beautiful as your works..thanks a bunch dear :)
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