Friday, March 10, 2006

Animals


Men with vision
Restricted to
Dangling breasts
And orbs of flesh

Women courting
Beyond moral rhythms,
Living a life gauging
Carrots and carets

Anonymous parents
As seed's faucets
Instills anonymity
On nascent faces

Faking and masking.
Lies and truth likes
Animals and Neanderthals
From genesis, to back..

Thriving towards
A Gross extinction -
Of better men
Of better women

Spout on creator - blame him
For prime's need
Be satisfied for a brief moment
In your innate animal instincts..

Shame on you..



This post is dedicated to Blank Noise Project".

Against attrocities, abuses or harresment of any kind. Be it against women, men or children.

If you are someone who is driven more by the flesh than by conscience, the Animal is you..be ashamed

Thanks to that friend who shared info & views about this project.

8 comments:

GhostOfTomJoad said...

Nice... but, let's not give animals a bad name by comparing ourselves to them.

Inkblot said...

I thought the first section was leading somewhere else and wanted to say...brilliant!

s said...

i cherish my animal instincts. =)

also, i want to thank you for all your encouraging comments.

the muses smile on you.

Anonymous said...

animals r far better than we r. at least they r honest. we r not :)

Dreamy Eyed Gal said...

Hey animals r better and much more simple than humans!!!

Prerona said...

didnt i leave a comment here? did you delete it? :(

Vidhu Venkat said...

Excellent ...choice of words...whoah!!

'Living a life gauging
Carrots and carets' ...too clever!

Neha said...

this is a very good effort. I've been thinking of becoming a part of this project itself..