Wednesday, March 15, 2006

Inertia











Stay

We haven't
left one another
we haven't
lived it as determined
we forsake
assumptions
change for better
stay in
a relation
as we are
but as something
not defined

    
..Leave

Along the
corridor of
tattered heart
trudge along
and reach
mad man's
byzantum
there amongst
the rubbles
of sliced
silences and
questions pick
out all
that concerns you
Whence done,
prefer to leave
than sticking around
There, I find all
garbage gone even
the stench & stains,
I hide behind..

10 comments:

Dreamy Eyed Gal said...

wow!!!...how do u write so well?!!!

shooting star said...

even
the stench & stains,
I hide behind...........i liked this.....great writing

Vidhu Venkat said...

Excellent ...inertia..huh?...well captioned!
well written

Inkblot said...

wow, still trying to figure it all out and it seems different everytime I read it!

: M : said...

u know sumthin ur scaring me..everytime i read something of urs, i am reminded of this time last year..well almost this time, and D.

and ur hardly online anymore...so buzz me wen u do log in..i have a bone to pick with u .

che sara sara said...

i tried to trace you in the incandescent glow
searched searched...but found only depth in darkness

Anonymous said...

brilliant as always :)

Dreamy Eyed Gal said...

The more I read it, the more I luv it...really, I wish u wrote everyday...its just that u write so damn well!!!..waiting for ur next post:-)

Devilish Angel said...

Wow...

Φ said...

DEG Hey you are so kind. Thanks for your nice words :). Glad you like it

DG Thanks a bunch :)

SS Thanks a bunch :)

Vi :D

IB Don't read much into it.. thanks so much :)

CA :-|..hmm. Caught up with work..jus surviving. Bone to pick..omg :(

Sop Answer for you will b in a seperate post :)..

Lo Not half brilliant as your works are.. :)..thanks for the nice words

DEG :)..wish muses work over time for me..but they don't..but wud sure try.. thanks for being patient ^_^

Vanathi Thanks dear :)