Sunday, July 09, 2006

Jack of Club

I have..
  left you indulge in me
In a shuffled & predictable pack,
   as jack of clubs
and queen of spades.
   misplaced and caught
in odd set of games
   with bad poker hands
your entry, exit & wordplay
   cleave me to pieces
like a serrated knife
   hmmm irony it is
even if I play
   King of dice
and you,
   the queen of (someone’s) heart..

12 comments:

che sara sara said...

oh wow...the guy is back
the king is back...

Blue Athena said...

Ah, V!

Inkblot said...

you'd still play to lose...nice to have you back. :)

Prerona said...

wow! long time, no? :)
i really liked ...

Vidhu Venkat said...

thwas excellent vnthi...the last verses got me captivated...I must go wid sophie....u are indeed back!

Wanderer said...

(sigh!) ... :)))
you no Jack, you King- you rule!



ps: I only feel that in the last line, the 'someone' need not be there... 'queen of hearts' is explanatory enough...

Neer said...

and here... am wishing for a king of my heart!! :)

hey Vinod,

amazing write up and yep, i read each every one of them on the blog,...all the three!

thanks for dropping by!

-N

Neer said...

thanks phi!! :)

Neer said...

why no updates?? :(

but then, i know.. sometimes.. the words just flow.. sometimes.. all is blank... noise... and these fishes are tough to catch! :)

you take care!

Vidya said...

That was something! Interesting actually....

shyloh's poetry said...

The queen of (someone's hear) that was beautiful.
Missed reading you.

Monami Roy said...

70 thots wrapped up in a game? bring it on....
peace..!!
\m/