Tuesday, November 07, 2006

Requiem

Rain drenched road
where I last left you
with a quick peck,
the cobblestone
streets that echoed,
that vanishes
into the muddy streets
of malachite green meadow,
is same no more.


Its raining now
where I had left you last..
Meadows fragrance
rob me off your smell.
Yonder beyond that
stole images I held.
Only stones echo pitter-patter of rain
like the peck I left on your cheek, once,
that's now..no more..

9 comments:

silas said...

Your shadow walked away,
but soul here awaits
besides the footsteps erased
is my heart, with your fire still ablaze.

loved it!

che sara sara said...

the warmth of love and togetherness he shared...
suddenly he dissappeared in the air like smoke
i could neither feel him nor hold... he is no more here... for he is gone...

Inkblot said...

can smell this one...potently

Neer said...

quite an imagery!! :)

p.s: what did they have to say?? keep guessing!

Neer said...

i hate getting pink!! thank you, Phi!! :)

Neer said...

Camera: Cyber-shot® DSC-W30 Digital CameraspacerDSC-W30... yea.. quite low end... but works beautifully for the amateurish work! :p

Neer said...

and hey Phi... thank you! will wait for the verses! :)

Neer said...

danke, herr! :)
guten tag!

Neer said...

mein Vergnügen, herr!