Monday, March 26, 2007
Kohl eyes & moonless night
She : A pilgrim in search of his presence..
... a shy locust in pursuit of lantern's glow.
He : She has lit up my otherwise dull lachrymose night
wait sets with the dusk and fast.
I absolve moon-god, for a moonless sky
Her benign appearance devours confusions. clamours cease.
In her everyday sojourn, she begins to narrate..
And slowly her kohl smudged eyes curtains my night..
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too good !
hey you are back...
i m so happy
and should i say !..you are just awesome with words, expressions and emotions...
Hey, it should be "kohl" and not "khol"!
and i like the smart use of the word kohl instead of its more obvious synonym! ;)
thanks dears..
Soph : Yep am glad too after losing the blog and getting it back phew..
Vids : :-D my proofreader for life.. i don have to damn worry bout checking it as long as you are reading me .. thanks a bunch
Very very romantic and tender! :)
Ishqa Ishqa!!! :)
Exceptional work! I have read this post again and again over the last few weeks. Every time I read it, the beauty of the picture you paint becomes more vivid.
Sensuous and romantic! Very nice!:)
Btw...where have u disappeared?
though i had to refer certain words to the dictionary, it was worth reading the poem.I can picturise the situation and its worth wasting time.U continue being an inspiration for my blogging.Hats off!!!
Long time !! No post !! Don't let this page sedate !!
wow!!! where are you??
It reminded me of my unpublished one...
Tickled her existence... as his lanugos brush her... and slowly he covers her as cloud.... and it poured...
The shy in her lost the meaning when the day broke while she felt aroused in darkness of night....
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