Friday, November 17, 2006

Bulb..Bubble..Burst..

Speckle of dust
caught in a
bubble of dream,
awaits resurrection
from within its
iridescent orb that
floats in a
school of bubbles
that holds a
speck each

Bubbles snap for two
as they run into each other
making the vertex
violet for a sec and
dissolutes without noise,
revealing him to her
and her to him,
under new light
they levitate close
but not closer

Him lost, at the sight
of her, who
stares like a child
that just lost a balloon,
with pouted lips,
trying to smile
and a face that's
half naked
between her
disheveled tousle.

Her,
not lost,
but gauging
by the lines
of smile that
ran forth from corner
of his eyes
like a child
that found
the lost candy

moment for a moment
shared between unfettered specks
and before they could
exchange another..
bubbles envelope
steering each, to its own
..but with traces of
his blue on to hers
and her pink on to his
bubble as they drift...

12 comments:

Prerona said...

"Her,
not lost,
but gauging
by the lines
of smile that
ran forth from corner
of his eyes
like a child
that found
the lost candy"

this is beautiful ... reminded me of something. or someone. she is lost though.

Neer said...

passion...

Neer said...

*hardly* Uma Thurman in Kill Bill!! Hmm...

Neer said...

*so u made the geisha to be devil* :p

Neer said...

it sure does come easy to you... !!!

Neer said...

really??? u sherlock holmes!!

Wanderer said...

hmmm... loved the first para...and then the last 2 of His and Hers took me on a very different plane... nicely connected! :)

Neer said...

and danke... for those brilliant verses!

S.L. Corsua said...

A speck in each bubble in a horde of bubbles... Quite an image I enjoy, especially in relation to the last four lines. ^_^ Both may be mere "specks of dust," figuratively speaking, but to each other, both are worth much more. Worth gemstones even. And, though the time spent together be fleeting, the mark or memory of one stays, remains with the other. ^_^

Hullo, dear. Thanks for the visit and the comment. Be blessed.

Wanderer said...

come back- it's been so long
since I heard your song.

where art thou?

Vidya said...

It is something more than the snapping of bubbles that I see here... The meeting of two eyes?

Thats what came to my mind reading this poem...

Vidya said...

good to see u r back :)where is the new post?